Post by xjazzylegsdj on Apr 1, 2012 11:03:52 GMT -5
Ok, i wanted to put this in my old thread but i changed my mind since in Openoffice its 5 pages long... anyways, this is a 1-year old story... Called a dogs knife, mainly about a Russian war dog who fought in the war but was kidnapped and then was dumped in Canada and he kept on meeting other... dogs.
A Dogs Knife
Prologue
All i remember was laying in a basket as a puppy... With all my brothers and sisters... I see so many people walk in.
They Choose my sister... my other sister... my brother... and all my other sisters and brothers. But... over ME.
But the last man walked in and took me, he didn’t pet me or play with me before he took me. He just picked me up, gave money to my previous owner and walked away... with me.
Then i was put in a huge mansion... a huge building! That had many other dogs. I made so many friends.
But we didnt do such fun stuff there anyways...
I ran, i ate, i ran, i ate... i trained. I was training for something every human feared!
Deeply in their souls, there was a danger i didnt know about!
But then, i finally... i finally knew. What it was, how did it happen and why...
it was WAR.
Then, before i knew it. My good life ended, and the war started.
I was a messenger. But it was dangerous. I also could kill but right now i needed to give a message to the west group of soldiers.
I was running, and running, through a dirt of ashes, i couldnt see the earthy soil and the beautiful flowers, only ashes, branches and blood... too much of it.
Its not what i thought of it... i herd rattling while i was running. It wasnt a bomb, nor a thing with a heart. It was my knife. My knife i got for protection.
The flag... printed on the pocket, WHITE, BLUE and RED....
Russia.... Russia... RUSSIA
The country i was fighting for... The message i was carrying was important. And i had to give it... but sadly i failed.
A bomb... The enemies Bomb, was heading my way. It was so close to the earth. I was pretty far but it would have still hit me, i ran so fast i felt like i lost the air in my lungs.
Then it hit... it hit the earths soil! It ruined it and made it into ashes!
But the light... the pretty light... The light seemed so nice, like heaven... like hell...
It changed. The light, the death, the thoughts...
And it exploded...
Chapter 1
Dead inside
“na na... na na na... na na...” I sang quietly. To the humans it was whimpering.
I sighed and i felt a wind againt my fur. Was i alive? Was the hell over? no...
I opened my eyes and saw... i was laying on a white moving bed with white sheets. And a long hall with doors and rooms, with dogs. Some where having their paws checked, some were sleeping...
This was a hospital... a hospital for war animals.
I remember who i was.
I was the leader of the war K9 unit.
I was a caanan dog.
My name was... Yurik.
So i survived, i wanted to die! I wanted to! But i sighed instead and kept laying there, starring at the moving walls. And the openings, every time i zoomed by, the dogs would noticed and gasp seeing me... the most important dog... down.
The humans in the white and baby blue colored shirts. Were running and pushing or either pulling my rolling bed.
I looked back, at the entrance and i saw something... it was my mother! Sitting just right in front of the entrance! She was dead, dead... was i? Was i just dreaming...? no.
The dog got up and it showed it wasn’t my mother, its tail was longer and eyes had more black in it.
And its eyes showed nothing... nothing. Those big blue eyes, just glared at me. The dog put one paw in front of it and bowed its head then turned around and walked out into the night. As a cloud of dust swooped in and it disappeared.
Who...?
Who, i asked myself.
How should i know?
I growled at myself and put my paw on my muzzle covering my face.
Next time i opened my eyes... i was in a room with my door closed. I again remembered what happened. The flashback kept zooming in my head, the red, yellow and orange light.
I herd and saw the little knob rattle and turn slowly. As the door opened and i saw my friends... my friends who were still alive... enter the room. My friends and me were highly trained. To open doors, to dodge obstacles and to tell who is friend and who is enemy.
“Yurik! You alright?!” yelled a black dog. That was Kanchitka. A male blue russian terrier.
He was a senior fighter and messenger. He wasn’t the best dog when he was angry so everyone avoided getting him angry.
“does it look like im ok?!” i growled at him slightly standing up but my hind legs were still laying.
“no...” He said slowly and quietly as he took his front paws off my bed and backed away slowly. There were three other dogs.
Tacha, Timuun and Medvet.
Timuun and Tacha were both brother and sister. They were both jack russells. Tacha was a black and white jack russell. And timuun was a brown and white one. Medvet, meaning bear. Was a brown Shnauzer. He was pretty big.
The door slightly moved open again as the humans came in and shooed my friends away. One of them was carying something sharp... he was hiding it in his hand and then he put it behind the chair when no one was looking. He eyed him suspiciously as he walked out the door. No one noticed him.
I sighed and looked out the door wondering if he would come back. But he didnt...
When they first dragged me into this room after a while there was a strange beeping noise. But this time it started beeping faster... and faster... and i fainted.
2 HOURS LATER...
“Hes never coming back is he...?” mumbled a voice below me.
“nope... well at least he escaped this hell” replied another voice.
I noticed them, it was Medvet and Timuun.
“its not going to be such hell after WE win the war” snarled Kanchitka.
“you dont know the future!” growled Tacha back.
My eyes were barely open. And again... that beeping noise started slowly beeping again. The gang perked their ears and looked at me.
Timuun gasped and Medvet stood up “thats not possible...” mumbled Medvet as he slowly walked up to the bed staring up at me. “of course its impossible! That thing must be lying!” growled Kanchitka. Always a toughy. Always aggressive.
“see, hes dead!” said Medvet dryly and bit the top of my paw. My eyes shot open, my eyes were pure green with no black dots like every other living thing has. And without controlling my claws and mouth i slashed Medvet face and bit throat throwing him against the wall. The group gasped and their hind-legs shivered. I licked the blood my muzzle off like a blood-thirsty demon.
“hey, im on your side!” yelled Medvet. More like stuttering.
My growling stopped but my teeth were still showing. My eyes came back to normal and my eyes were surprised. Not scared... surprised. I closed my mouth and backed up until my bed ended.
“whats your problem Yurik!?” snapped Kanchitka scared that i might attack him tooo “i-im sorry! It was just instinct!” i said quickly. I herd footsteps approaching the door even if there were a thousand footsteps per 2 minutes. Everybody looked at the door as i lowered my tail.
The nurses came in and started mumbling somethings to each other. They sighed and picked up Timuun and Tacha, Medvet and Kanchitka were led out by leashes since they were a little heavy.
One of them started slowly walking to me. I could already see she was new and she was afraid of me. I let her touch my fur and give me some medicine. I wondered what it was because it made me feel hyper, Adrenaline?
Maybe not...
1:34 AM
I had a dream that night. But as soon as it ended i could barely remember a scrap... but i could hear...hear footsteps approaching again. Even if it was late the hospital was still open, still awake and running.
But these footsteps were quiet and swift as they were trying to escape a prison. The door slowly opened as the same man that put the sharp thing behind the chair. I gasped and stood up as he took the sharp thing from behind the chair and started walking towards me. I knew those eyes. Those blue innocent eyes. That was a enemy of Russia. The man had tried to steal me because he wanted to make Russia give up. I growled and barked at the man tho no noise came out since my throat was dried up and in need of water.
As quick as a flash the man injected the weird stuff inside the sharp thing. I growled but he held my muzzle from snapping, barking or howling for help. I tried to outpower him but failed. Soon i started feeling drowsy, every second i felt like i could fall and go to sleep as soon as i collapse but i refused.
It was a terrible thing to stand against, the fatigue just swept over me. But i couldnt hold it anymore, i had to sleep.
My view darkened as i closed my eyes. And i fell, fell on my bed but i felt myself being picked up by human hands.
“He 'aint wakin' up, that poor lad” said a muffled voice.
“twas a big crash, yesiree” it said again. “but he was in a-” replied another voice, a female.
A Dogs Knife
Prologue
All i remember was laying in a basket as a puppy... With all my brothers and sisters... I see so many people walk in.
They Choose my sister... my other sister... my brother... and all my other sisters and brothers. But... over ME.
But the last man walked in and took me, he didn’t pet me or play with me before he took me. He just picked me up, gave money to my previous owner and walked away... with me.
Then i was put in a huge mansion... a huge building! That had many other dogs. I made so many friends.
But we didnt do such fun stuff there anyways...
I ran, i ate, i ran, i ate... i trained. I was training for something every human feared!
Deeply in their souls, there was a danger i didnt know about!
But then, i finally... i finally knew. What it was, how did it happen and why...
it was WAR.
Then, before i knew it. My good life ended, and the war started.
I was a messenger. But it was dangerous. I also could kill but right now i needed to give a message to the west group of soldiers.
I was running, and running, through a dirt of ashes, i couldnt see the earthy soil and the beautiful flowers, only ashes, branches and blood... too much of it.
Its not what i thought of it... i herd rattling while i was running. It wasnt a bomb, nor a thing with a heart. It was my knife. My knife i got for protection.
The flag... printed on the pocket, WHITE, BLUE and RED....
Russia.... Russia... RUSSIA
The country i was fighting for... The message i was carrying was important. And i had to give it... but sadly i failed.
A bomb... The enemies Bomb, was heading my way. It was so close to the earth. I was pretty far but it would have still hit me, i ran so fast i felt like i lost the air in my lungs.
Then it hit... it hit the earths soil! It ruined it and made it into ashes!
But the light... the pretty light... The light seemed so nice, like heaven... like hell...
It changed. The light, the death, the thoughts...
And it exploded...
Chapter 1
Dead inside
“na na... na na na... na na...” I sang quietly. To the humans it was whimpering.
I sighed and i felt a wind againt my fur. Was i alive? Was the hell over? no...
I opened my eyes and saw... i was laying on a white moving bed with white sheets. And a long hall with doors and rooms, with dogs. Some where having their paws checked, some were sleeping...
This was a hospital... a hospital for war animals.
I remember who i was.
I was the leader of the war K9 unit.
I was a caanan dog.
My name was... Yurik.
So i survived, i wanted to die! I wanted to! But i sighed instead and kept laying there, starring at the moving walls. And the openings, every time i zoomed by, the dogs would noticed and gasp seeing me... the most important dog... down.
The humans in the white and baby blue colored shirts. Were running and pushing or either pulling my rolling bed.
I looked back, at the entrance and i saw something... it was my mother! Sitting just right in front of the entrance! She was dead, dead... was i? Was i just dreaming...? no.
The dog got up and it showed it wasn’t my mother, its tail was longer and eyes had more black in it.
And its eyes showed nothing... nothing. Those big blue eyes, just glared at me. The dog put one paw in front of it and bowed its head then turned around and walked out into the night. As a cloud of dust swooped in and it disappeared.
Who...?
Who, i asked myself.
How should i know?
I growled at myself and put my paw on my muzzle covering my face.
Next time i opened my eyes... i was in a room with my door closed. I again remembered what happened. The flashback kept zooming in my head, the red, yellow and orange light.
I herd and saw the little knob rattle and turn slowly. As the door opened and i saw my friends... my friends who were still alive... enter the room. My friends and me were highly trained. To open doors, to dodge obstacles and to tell who is friend and who is enemy.
“Yurik! You alright?!” yelled a black dog. That was Kanchitka. A male blue russian terrier.
He was a senior fighter and messenger. He wasn’t the best dog when he was angry so everyone avoided getting him angry.
“does it look like im ok?!” i growled at him slightly standing up but my hind legs were still laying.
“no...” He said slowly and quietly as he took his front paws off my bed and backed away slowly. There were three other dogs.
Tacha, Timuun and Medvet.
Timuun and Tacha were both brother and sister. They were both jack russells. Tacha was a black and white jack russell. And timuun was a brown and white one. Medvet, meaning bear. Was a brown Shnauzer. He was pretty big.
The door slightly moved open again as the humans came in and shooed my friends away. One of them was carying something sharp... he was hiding it in his hand and then he put it behind the chair when no one was looking. He eyed him suspiciously as he walked out the door. No one noticed him.
I sighed and looked out the door wondering if he would come back. But he didnt...
When they first dragged me into this room after a while there was a strange beeping noise. But this time it started beeping faster... and faster... and i fainted.
2 HOURS LATER...
“Hes never coming back is he...?” mumbled a voice below me.
“nope... well at least he escaped this hell” replied another voice.
I noticed them, it was Medvet and Timuun.
“its not going to be such hell after WE win the war” snarled Kanchitka.
“you dont know the future!” growled Tacha back.
My eyes were barely open. And again... that beeping noise started slowly beeping again. The gang perked their ears and looked at me.
Timuun gasped and Medvet stood up “thats not possible...” mumbled Medvet as he slowly walked up to the bed staring up at me. “of course its impossible! That thing must be lying!” growled Kanchitka. Always a toughy. Always aggressive.
“see, hes dead!” said Medvet dryly and bit the top of my paw. My eyes shot open, my eyes were pure green with no black dots like every other living thing has. And without controlling my claws and mouth i slashed Medvet face and bit throat throwing him against the wall. The group gasped and their hind-legs shivered. I licked the blood my muzzle off like a blood-thirsty demon.
“hey, im on your side!” yelled Medvet. More like stuttering.
My growling stopped but my teeth were still showing. My eyes came back to normal and my eyes were surprised. Not scared... surprised. I closed my mouth and backed up until my bed ended.
“whats your problem Yurik!?” snapped Kanchitka scared that i might attack him tooo “i-im sorry! It was just instinct!” i said quickly. I herd footsteps approaching the door even if there were a thousand footsteps per 2 minutes. Everybody looked at the door as i lowered my tail.
The nurses came in and started mumbling somethings to each other. They sighed and picked up Timuun and Tacha, Medvet and Kanchitka were led out by leashes since they were a little heavy.
One of them started slowly walking to me. I could already see she was new and she was afraid of me. I let her touch my fur and give me some medicine. I wondered what it was because it made me feel hyper, Adrenaline?
Maybe not...
1:34 AM
I had a dream that night. But as soon as it ended i could barely remember a scrap... but i could hear...hear footsteps approaching again. Even if it was late the hospital was still open, still awake and running.
But these footsteps were quiet and swift as they were trying to escape a prison. The door slowly opened as the same man that put the sharp thing behind the chair. I gasped and stood up as he took the sharp thing from behind the chair and started walking towards me. I knew those eyes. Those blue innocent eyes. That was a enemy of Russia. The man had tried to steal me because he wanted to make Russia give up. I growled and barked at the man tho no noise came out since my throat was dried up and in need of water.
As quick as a flash the man injected the weird stuff inside the sharp thing. I growled but he held my muzzle from snapping, barking or howling for help. I tried to outpower him but failed. Soon i started feeling drowsy, every second i felt like i could fall and go to sleep as soon as i collapse but i refused.
It was a terrible thing to stand against, the fatigue just swept over me. But i couldnt hold it anymore, i had to sleep.
My view darkened as i closed my eyes. And i fell, fell on my bed but i felt myself being picked up by human hands.
“He 'aint wakin' up, that poor lad” said a muffled voice.
“twas a big crash, yesiree” it said again. “but he was in a-” replied another voice, a female.